Tuesday 6 July 2010

Tale of a Monsoon Night

On a lonely, dark monsoon night,
sits against me an empty broken chair,
midnight shivers in the shivering cold,
a nicotinic smoke chasing the air.

A distant radio plays the music of the nineties,
those rowdy, nonsensical, chaotic songs,
songs that sing through the chambers of my age,

parts of which my nostalgia lives on.

I stand intensely engaged in a monologue,
reaching out to every unvisited corner of me,
disturbed by a plenty atrocities in the dark sky above,
resurrecting as the silence I fake to be.

The smell of a young omelette on a fry pan,
mixed with the drizzle on the outskirts of Bombay,
equipped with Pink Floyd, Eliot, and Einstein,
yet the lunatic's Delhi seems far away.

She creeps into a thunder of events, which
follows me from a city to another,
I am nothing more than a blinded nothingness,
trembling on a path to where we are together.

Also published in the October 2011 edition of Kritya - available here.

41 comments:

doggy said...

its really well written mihir.... finally one that i could understand :P ... kiddin ... but yea ... nice one :)

Shrenik said...

WoW, this one is good, really well written.. ( expressed what we discussed and ur mind ) .. and dun wrry, it will be ok.. :)

Unknown said...

amazing... speclly th delhi part..I loved it...

Unknown said...

straight from the heart....
too good!!

Unknown said...

straight from the heart....
too good!!

Unknown said...

Badhiya hai. Umda!!

Unknown said...

Badhiya hai. Umda!!

Pratik Mishra said...

Badhiya hai. Umda!!

Bhavishya said...
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Bhavishya said...

This is a good one! well, an observation : your writing just gets better and more frequent whenever i am away. Anyway, its very sweet.

nandini hegde said...

rlly well return...i envy ur choice of words..:)

Bhavishya said...

This is a good one. Well, i think you write better whenever i am away and more often too. Anyway, it's very sweet!
P.S : I'll come back soon. So, write as much as you can in these days. :)

smeet said...

dude its nice yaar...delhi part ya too good...amazing how u put it in...

Vishnu Menon said...

Good one bro!

Blackmagic said...

@ All of you: Thanks a ton. Feedback, as usual, is the greatest encouragement. More so when people repeat the same comments. :p
Honestly, thank you. :)

@ Bhavi: That sounds promising.

ni8rider said...

lovely.. :)
nice one mihir

Unknown said...

hey good work .keep it up. u hv gr8 imagination power.

minnakshi das said...

very niice mehir n i agree its totally frm the heart n i gv bhavi some credit fr giving u the motivation :)keep feeding ur creative side...

Unknown said...

hey great work...i could feel the atmosphere u created in writing

kaustubh said...

:)..lovely..:)..nice one
cheers mihir.

Kurt said...

killa ...straight from the heart.

Unknown said...

hey naaaice.....
m still thinkin...bout sm o d lines.....:))

Anonymous said...

my over-stressed Gre filled brains can only find spelling mistakes. See i made a different comment than others. but still I stand by what I said that day Mihir - you can fill an entire gamut of emotions in a poem than in a story.

niraj said...
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nirajj..severus snape..is me.. said...

reallyy a classic one...

niraj said...

reallyyy a good one....

Blackmagic said...

Thank you guys. Thanks a lot :)

Malcolm said...

well penned my friend...great job

Anonymous said...

hhmm.. well written!!

Anonymous said...

really nice one dude... keep it up... use such simple language so gujju people like me can understand...

Blackmagic said...

@ Malcom and Abhishek: Thanks.

@ Shreyans: hahahaha. Thanks.

abliblii said...

bhaari hain

Unknown said...

Its like old wine..your writing...just keeps getting better by the day..I loved the way your words infuse life, into the most mundane things..!

Jingle said...

welcome...

very fine tuned piece.

A++

Anonymous said...

My goodness this was just pure loveliness, the story, the penning, the metaphors, just fluidly beautiful.
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Anonymous said...

Great images you create here. I love the 'young omelette'!

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Kodjo Deynoo said...

keep the good work coming friend

Mia said...

this hit me pretty close, for one i live in hope and dread for monsoon season every year. a kaleidoscope of emotions, and thoughts, in both. thank you. :)

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Blackmagic said...

Thank you guys. I'm overjoyed to read your comments.

Ami said...

Its was amazing .. You write so well