Whistles through the woods,
traces an arc above the sea.
An enclosed sea coast,
Being spied on through the window,
Of a cheap hotel room,
Draws a face, so lovely.
Inside the room, a dusty lampshade emits light,
in the shape of me. The shape of me,
and the crossover wind,
travels a distance over the sea.
The crossover wind,
trapped between the hotel and the sea,
A prisoner of the evening.
The frayed ends of the evening,
prick in my eyes,
initiating the gradual process,
Of engendering the night.
Two eyes. Two anachronistic captives of an anachronistic night,
hunt for their murderer. Their murderer,
like the crossover wind , mad and noisy,
seeking its own identity, restlessly wanders.
The crossover wind,
Greets this town, exchanges a smile,
Grabs a whit of it from the native air.
The midway hangs,
Cut by the sea-shore off the midnight,
Like the memory of an ex-lover
suspended in the twilight.
A private shadow, entangled by the hotel walls,
sinks in the sea. Sinks in the sea,
when the crossover wind,
frisks the him within me.
Also published in the November 2011 edition of the Enchanting Verses - available here.
6 comments:
The crossover wind,
trapped between the hotel and the sea,
A prisoner of the evening....
love these lines, superb entry.
A++
Welcome to JP..
Thank you, Jingle. :)
did you join us?
welcome to Poets Rally week 41
and welcome to poetry potluck week 30 this weekend on Sunday.
you rock.
I am working on placing your link to Jingle Poetry Blog Roll.
keep it up.
Well done. As Jingle points out: some memoriable lines. Poem on ...
And thanks for joining in Poets Rally. :-)
These line are not as abstract apparently! Very well composed.. :)
Hugs x
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